I love it when a few lines tell an entire story (one shared and felt be so many). To be standing there, looking at the want we want (and often love), wondering if our affection will be returned... dreaming of how delicious it would be if a stolen kiss becomes the fulfillment of another's wish.
I like really like the rhythm... and the playfulness of the tone, which works so well at conveying the sort of nervousness these kinds of feelings will provoke.
Oh gosh this is such a wonderfully passionate write! ❤️
ReplyDeleteThank you very much! :)
DeleteA kiss can mean so much... maybe the stolen kind are the best.
ReplyDeleteThey certainly can be the sweetest. :)
DeleteThat is the big question - whether the kiss would be returned or not.
ReplyDeleteThat it is! Thank you! :)
DeleteThat space of time, waiting to see if the kiss will be returned, can be one of the most exquisite tortures known to humankind.
ReplyDeleteIsn't that the truth! Thank you.
DeleteI love it when a few lines tell an entire story (one shared and felt be so many). To be standing there, looking at the want we want (and often love), wondering if our affection will be returned... dreaming of how delicious it would be if a stolen kiss becomes the fulfillment of another's wish.
ReplyDeleteI like really like the rhythm... and the playfulness of the tone, which works so well at conveying the sort of nervousness these kinds of feelings will provoke.
Thank you! I like playful writes that have a bit of a wink to them.
DeleteAnd they like you back. Because this is yummy. :)
Deletetake you by surprise....yes...bkm
ReplyDeleteThe best kind of surprise!
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