Quiet

Quiet 

  
I want to go 
Where they 
Turn the music 
Up so loud
We cannot speak
The bass thumps
So intensely 
It becomes 
A second heartbeat
I want to go somewhere loud
So we can drown out the noise
And just be quiet


Words: ©2017 Lori Carnegie Ryan
Image: CCO




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  1. I like the cryptic way this is written , a hidden meaning in a way if I read it correctly

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    1. Thank you. Sometimes what's going on inside my head is so loud I need something even louder to make it seem quiet. I guess it's that old saying... "it's so loud I can't hear myself think."

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  2. More often then i care to admit .......lol

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