Ocean Secrets © Lori 8/10/2019 Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Ocean Secrets There are secrets only the ocean can tell I close my eyes And listen very carefully They whisper Shhh… Shhh… Shhh… Words: ©2019LCR Image: Boy and Sea Shell by Edouard Boubat Submitted to: The Sunday Muse #68 Labels: Free Verse Photo Prompt Secrets Water Reaction: Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments Eddie Bluelights10 August 2019 at 11:16Love it, and nice to meet you, Lori.ReplyDeleteRepliesLori10 August 2019 at 11:36Thank you very much. And you as well. DeleteRepliesReplyReplytonispencer10 August 2019 at 13:33Perfection ReplyDeleteRepliesLori10 August 2019 at 18:06Thank you! DeleteRepliesReplyReplyCarrie Van Horn10 August 2019 at 14:01Yes, I hear that too! This is beautiful Lori! Thank you so much for joining us! It is wonderful to see you here!!ReplyDeleteRepliesLori10 August 2019 at 18:08Thank you! I appreciate you having me! This image really grabbed me. DeleteRepliesReplyReplyMagaly Guerrero11 August 2019 at 09:47I shall close my eyes and hold my tongue for a while, to enjoy the whispers...Love the structure of this piece, the way the last line invites us into the poem. ReplyDeleteRepliesLori11 August 2019 at 15:41Thank you so much! This is one of those writes that whispered itself to me. DeleteRepliesReplyReplyLinda Lee Lyberg11 August 2019 at 13:29I love this!ReplyDeleteRepliesLori11 August 2019 at 15:42Thank you! DeleteRepliesReplyReplyFireblossom11 August 2019 at 17:12I'd know that voice anywhere.ReplyDeleteRepliesLori11 August 2019 at 19:28Me too! DeleteRepliesReplyReplyC. Sandlin11 August 2019 at 18:36Love the whisper/wave at the end, such a calming way to close :)ReplyDeleteRepliesLori11 August 2019 at 19:29Thank you so much! DeleteRepliesReplyReplypurplepeninportland.com11 August 2019 at 20:07The boy does look intent upon hearing the ocean's secrets. Lovely, Lori!ReplyDeleteRepliesLori11 August 2019 at 22:12I wanted to hear them too! Thank you! DeleteRepliesReplyReplyphillipkscott12 August 2019 at 09:23What a great sentiment! And so calming.ReplyDeleteRepliesLori12 August 2019 at 10:00Thank you! DeleteRepliesReplyReplySusie Clevenger12 August 2019 at 13:45Yes, there are things only the ocean can speak. I love this.ReplyDeleteRepliesLori12 August 2019 at 14:12Agreed! Thank you!DeleteRepliesReplyReplyMargaret12 August 2019 at 15:54That "whoooshy" sound it makes = does sound like shhh. Sweet ReplyDeleteRepliesLori12 August 2019 at 16:50Yes it does! :)DeleteRepliesReplyReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Thank you for taking the time to read and comment!