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Gordian's Knot

© Lori 1/22/2019

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Gordian's Knot

We are a Gordian's knot

Bound so tightly

I cannot find

Where you end

And I begin

Words: ©2017LCR

Image: CCO
17 Words

Labels: 17 Words Bound Love

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