So Long

So Long


Two possibilities
Time
And
Goodbye
Both Fitting

Words: ©2020LCR
Image: CCO
Submitted to: Writers' Pantry #10 - March Contemplation  


Comments

  1. short and sharp. though the words make me ponder for some time. :)

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    1. Thank you. I sat with them for awhile myself. :)

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  2. This is the kind of poem that could be an entire meditation. :)

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    1. Thank you. I'm meditating on the end of this very long winter! :)

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  3. Maybe in most cases we will need both time and goodbyes...

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  4. Weirdly (or maybe not all that weird), I find myself feeling like the groundhog... stuck between winter and spring, between "time and goodbye" (and, perhaps, mostly wishing for a bloom of "Hellos").

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  5. Very crisp and deep too, Lori. Excellent...

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  6. Two possibilities, but so many things to take into account before we can even begin to guess which path is best. And hopefully we'll guess right.

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  7. Sometimes good-bye takes forever, lasts forever. And no matter how far down the road one travels, one never forgets.
    You nailed this concept. Long is long. well done.

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    1. You nailed it right on the head. Thank you.

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