So Long © Lori 3/08/2020 Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps So Long Two possibilities Time And Goodbye Both Fitting Words: ©2020LCR Image: CCO Submitted to: Writers' Pantry #10 - March Contemplation Labels: Meaning Micropoetry Poet's Prompt Spring Winter Wordplay Get link Facebook Twitter Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments Sanaa Rizvi8 March 2020 at 10:20Crisp and succinct! 💝ReplyDeleteRepliesLori8 March 2020 at 10:40Thank you. :) DeleteRepliesReplyReplydsnake18 March 2020 at 10:51short and sharp. though the words make me ponder for some time. :)ReplyDeleteRepliesLori8 March 2020 at 11:24Thank you. I sat with them for awhile myself. :) DeleteRepliesReplyReplyC. Sandlin8 March 2020 at 11:13This is the kind of poem that could be an entire meditation. :)ReplyDeleteRepliesLori8 March 2020 at 11:25Thank you. I'm meditating on the end of this very long winter! :) DeleteRepliesReplyReplybrudberg8 March 2020 at 12:06Maybe in most cases we will need both time and goodbyes...ReplyDeleteRepliesLori8 March 2020 at 13:03Most, but maybe not all. DeleteRepliesReplyReplyMagaly Guerrero8 March 2020 at 14:42Weirdly (or maybe not all that weird), I find myself feeling like the groundhog... stuck between winter and spring, between "time and goodbye" (and, perhaps, mostly wishing for a bloom of "Hellos").ReplyDeleteRepliesLori8 March 2020 at 15:07That makes two of us. :) DeleteRepliesReplyReplyanthonynorth8 March 2020 at 14:59Short but deep. Nice one.ReplyDeleteRepliesLori8 March 2020 at 15:07Thanks.DeleteRepliesReplyReplyscotthastiepoet8 March 2020 at 15:24Very crisp and deep too, Lori. Excellent...ReplyDeleteRepliesLori8 March 2020 at 16:03Appreciated. Thanks. DeleteRepliesReplyReplyR's Rue8 March 2020 at 15:34Nice. ReplyDeleteRepliesLori8 March 2020 at 16:03Thank you. DeleteRepliesReplyReplyRommy8 March 2020 at 16:13Two possibilities, but so many things to take into account before we can even begin to guess which path is best. And hopefully we'll guess right.ReplyDeleteRepliesLori8 March 2020 at 16:42That's definitely the hope. DeleteRepliesReplyReplyindybev8 March 2020 at 16:30Brief and evocative!ReplyDeleteRepliesLori8 March 2020 at 16:42Thank you. DeleteRepliesReplyReplyRosemary Nissen-Wade8 March 2020 at 23:26Succinct and porfound!ReplyDeleteRepliesReplyRosemary Nissen-Wade8 March 2020 at 23:26or even *profound (LOL)ReplyDeleteRepliesLori9 March 2020 at 13:18Lol! Thank you. :) DeleteRepliesReplyReplyRon.9 March 2020 at 06:59Sometimes good-bye takes forever, lasts forever. And no matter how far down the road one travels, one never forgets.You nailed this concept. Long is long. well done.ReplyDeleteRepliesLori9 March 2020 at 13:19You nailed it right on the head. Thank you. DeleteRepliesReplyReplyhyperCRYPTICal9 March 2020 at 10:27Both fitting indeed.Anna :o]ReplyDeleteRepliesLori9 March 2020 at 13:19Thanks Anna. :) DeleteRepliesReplyReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a comment Thank you for taking the time to read and comment!