Disappearing © Lori 8/29/2021 Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps DisappearingI walk the shores alone Waves erasing my footprints From the sand And when I chance to look back It is emptyLike I was never even thereWords: ©2021LCRImage: Used with Permission ©2021Alex Comments Helen30 August 2021 at 09:52There is a thread in much of your poetry ~~~ lonely, solitary. You write it well ~~ ReplyDeleteRepliesLori31 August 2021 at 09:56Probably my inner introvert longing for a little solitude. ;)DeleteRepliesReplyReplyMagaly Guerrero1 September 2021 at 09:19I agree with Helen's assessment, but just partially. To me, a lot of your poetry reads like the speaker is maintaining a conversation with the universe. One full of reflection... where there is longing, but not really loneliness. ReplyDeleteRepliesLori1 September 2021 at 12:30Thank you so much Magaly. That feels entirely like me and I'm so glad that is what speaks to you. DeleteRepliesReplyReplyAdd commentLoad more... Post a Comment Thank you for taking the time to read and comment!
There is a thread in much of your poetry ~~~ lonely, solitary. You write it well ~~
ReplyDeleteProbably my inner introvert longing for a little solitude. ;)
DeleteI agree with Helen's assessment, but just partially. To me, a lot of your poetry reads like the speaker is maintaining a conversation with the universe. One full of reflection... where there is longing, but not really loneliness.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Magaly. That feels entirely like me and I'm so glad that is what speaks to you.
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